Wednesday, 7 October 2015

As the flashing lights come towards me

  As the flashing lights come towards me... then I woke up... AHOH it was just a dream I was thinking that was real. Today is Halloween! I am going to ask for bang at people door. After a hour I called my friend Luis and ask him if he want to come with me and Luis said "Yes but we need to be careful because there is a scary clown looking for boys""Ok" said the boy that dreamed. At night,the two boys past in front of a scary house and... a clown appeared and they never did Halloween!!!!

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  1. Remember to use describing words. What are you seeing? Hearing? Smelling?

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  2. hi, you did a good job but not a lot of things make sense but wait there is something i liked how you were talking a clown so it was like a scary story.

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  4. Hello Natalia, you did an excellent job. I really like how you talked about Halloween, and a scary clown. That really scared me. What are you seeing, smelling, and hearing at the moment? Make it more about As The Flashing Lights Come Towards Me...... But besides all of that, it was amazing.

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