Thursday, 5 November 2015

I believe I can fly

Wednesday,Nov 4,2015



                                                        I believe I can fly


     One day there was a kid called Rick. He has two friends one called Lili and one called Kaven . The next day Rick woke up and went outside and find a red car , Rick  jump on the car and Lili  jump on the front of  the car then the car begins to go down the hill then Kaven grabbed the back of the car but he couldn't stop and he said " I see tree , I smell air and I feel the wend. " BOOM !!!!!
HAAAA! Wake up ! It was just a dream! :)
                                    

                                                    

2 comments:

  1. Hey Natalia! I liked your story! I liked how it was all a dream. But I've got some improvements for you. Double check your grammar, and you only made one spelling mistake. I remember there was this one time I was on my bike when I was young and I went down a steep incline, my dad was running after me, it was pretty funny. Did something like this happen to you? Overall, your story was pretty good! Keep up the great work!

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