Sunday, 6 December 2015

A Christmas Story

      With thump , down the chimney ! I know he was there! With out doing a sound I went  down the stairs and saw a man with a bag full of presents. The man with black boots like the darkness of the night. With a beard as white as the snow and his pants as the Christmas -red. A belt as dark as the black and a little square as gold as a gold medal. And a worm coat as red as a rose and as worm as a hot chocolate. Always there to put present under the tree and with out doing a sound eating his cookies! Merry Christmas everyone !!!

1 comment:

  1. Hey Natalia, I liked your story! But I got an improvement for you. On the second last sentence you made a grammar mistake. But I liked how you used metaphors and similes. I remember one Christmas Eve I left cookies on my dining table. On Christmas they were gone! Did you know that Santa Claus is St. Nicholas!? Overall I liked your story, keep up the awesome work!